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BEAUTIFUL IRONY
Contributed by
karoody
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Friday, 5th September 2008 @ 07:29:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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before you judge me
take the time to ponder
what it would feel like today
on august twenty-three;
Three Days Ago i got the news
and for a moment, i couldn't breathe
hearing it out loud from her
her words made my mind race
allow me to explain-
on may three i found new misery
TUMORS MRIS SEIZURES BRAINS TUBES FEAR
UNKNOWN SURGERY CANCER DEATH LIFE
so now you know about may
we can return to today
so here i am in front of you three day after i just found out
that i was not going to die
my rides not over, but i'm not dying!
guess what? i wish i was
but here's what else i found out
my own family has no faith in me
they are scared of me
my soul is so lost now
i may as well have cancer
Copyright ©
karoody
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2008-09-05 19:29:16]
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Re: BEAUTIFUL IRONY
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by wizard on
Friday, 5th September 2008 @ 10:15:37 PM AEST
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sad and moving...
be strong,
wiz |
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Re: BEAUTIFUL IRONY
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by young_tune on
Sunday, 7th September 2008 @ 04:23:39 AM AEST
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stay strong
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Re: BEAUTIFUL IRONY
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 7th September 2008 @ 02:28:52 PM AEST
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| im sorry you went thru this sweetie, and that i couldnt be online when you were going thru it and posted, i have faith in you always, ive missed you, big huggers n' big love nessa x |
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Re: BEAUTIFUL IRONY
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th September 2008 @ 09:02:11 AM AEST
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((((((((( Karabear )))))))))
So powerfully emotional! This one really chokes me up. You really know how to display your feelings in print.
You pretty much know how I feel about this. You are an incredible person. You are a gift, to all of us and to all else who know you. Those that don't realize it are just a bunch of ******** ! ! !
Take care,
Love
Tim |
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Re: BEAUTIFUL IRONY
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th September 2008 @ 11:38:00 PM AEST
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Oh hun, I understand how you feel. I truly do. The hardship of
feeling lost within your own family is sometimes unbearable.
But you have got the GREATEST news that you could have hoped
for in this situation. All that life has to offer can be yours! Everything
you dream, you can still dream! Surround yourself with dreams,
hopes, wishes and write write write!!! lol
Your depth sometimes pleasantly surprises me and inspires me
to be more. Let it inspire you! ^_^
always, with affection and hopes,
~ Breezy
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