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Flowers
Contributed by
navydocny
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Friday, 5th September 2008 @ 02:54:40 AM in AEST
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Three flowers, their mops of flaxen hair
Our garden, tended with your matronly care
All that is best in us, cleaved into three
Trice-bound, these paragons of esprit
Un-relenting, is your guardian’s clasp
The seepage of time, with its cruel rasp
No better protector, or teacher, to proal
Your love for them, endless, a gentle cajole
I rest well with our garden in your care
No better nurseryman this world shall fare
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Re: Flowers
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by FRANCO on
Friday, 5th September 2008 @ 03:12:02 AM AEST
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My friend, this a very fine poem blended with your in feelings. May God bless your family and keep it bound with love.
with love and respect,
FRANCO. |
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Re: Flowers
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 5th September 2008 @ 06:23:38 AM AEST
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your love and devotion to family is beautiful to read,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Flowers
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 5th September 2008 @ 07:14:07 AM AEST
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Beautifully written ...I love your use of the metaphor in this..
Well done..
Jenni |
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Re: Flowers
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by wizard on
Friday, 5th September 2008 @ 11:39:24 AM AEST
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well done sir,
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