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Goosebumps
Contributed by
eeeitak
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Thursday, 4th September 2008 @ 12:42:48 PM in AEST
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Feel the chills crawl up your spine
Watch the goosebumps start to rise
You never noticed me when I was alive
But you can feel me now, right at your side
I’m still as invisible as I always was
You couldn’t see me before simply because
I was never special, no treat for the eyes
Insecure and always shy
Feel the chills crawl up your spine
Watch the goosebumps start to rise
You never noticed me when I was alive
But you can feel me now, right at your side
Maybe I’m less invisible than I always was
You can feel me now simply because
I can manipulate your surroundings, chill your air
I’ll make you feel my pain, I’ll make you care
Feel the chills crawl up your spine
Watch the goosebumps start to rise
You never noticed me when I was alive
But you can feel me now, right at your side
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eeeitak
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Re: Goosebumps
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 4th September 2008 @ 01:10:18 PM AEST
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hauntingly enchanting...
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Goosebumps
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by Muinanyere on
Thursday, 4th September 2008 @ 03:43:47 PM AEST
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| This is amazing, very haunting especially this line: "You never noticed me when I was alive". Great write. |
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Re: Goosebumps
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by wizard on
Thursday, 4th September 2008 @ 09:14:55 PM AEST
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nice post katie, such an eerie feel...keep it up
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Re: Goosebumps
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by navydocny on
Friday, 5th September 2008 @ 02:18:17 AM AEST
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Very good write....
Puts me in the mood for Halloween..
Also has a darker side....
Good Stuff!
Steve |
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Re: Goosebumps
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th September 2008 @ 02:21:46 AM AEST
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Wow Katie, this certainly is haunting and eerie, very well done. Terrifically spooky!
~Jesse |
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Re: Goosebumps
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by spooky on
Friday, 5th September 2008 @ 07:31:57 AM AEST
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| sometimes i feel that my mother is around and i dont want to do anything to make her mad ,,a friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: Goosebumps
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by amt on
Saturday, 6th September 2008 @ 12:55:49 AM AEST
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Feel the chills crawl up your spine
Watch the goosebumps start to rise
You never noticed me when I was alive
But you can feel me now, right at your side.
i am in love with these lines.... |
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Re: Goosebumps
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th September 2008 @ 04:17:29 PM AEST
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This is darkeness at it's best, though it's but
a poem i can feel the relentless needling
of vengence knawing at the heart of the
betrayer . . . a splendid web of evil you've
woven here . . .
Ben . . . |
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Re: Goosebumps
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 23rd June 2012 @ 09:12:56 PM AEST
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I would say this poem lived up to every bit of its title. I can feel the chills. Great writing.
Thanks,
Tim |
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Re: Goosebumps
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 23rd June 2012 @ 09:14:35 PM AEST
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| P.S. It took me like, what year to figure out your member name. Katieee lol |
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