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~Invasion~
Contributed by
Jenni_K
on
Thursday, 4th September 2008 @ 10:32:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
obsession
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~~^~~
All day long, thoughts of you invade my mind
Not all of which are of the decent kind.
I dream of things I'd like to do with you,
Things I'm certain would please you too.
My imagination just keeps running wild.
I feel once more like a little child
A child who has gotten a brand new toy,
One which gives her endless joy.
And when the day finally turns to night,
My thoughts turn to your nibbles and bites,
Gentle kisses and your soft touch,
Sometimes I think I want you too much.
But for now, I'm only going to say,
That with you, I'd like to play.
Come on, Baby, let's have some fun,
After all the temptation, you've finally won!
~~^~~
Copyright ©
Jenni_K
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2008-09-04 10:32:41]
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Re: ~Invasion~
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by spooky on
Thursday, 4th September 2008 @ 10:35:52 AM AEST
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great write,, for someone who care for the little things like love, cherish, to be wanted,,
a friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: ~Invasion~
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by Muinanyere on
Thursday, 4th September 2008 @ 11:20:23 AM AEST
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| I like this, it flows so nicely. Great write :) |
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Re: ~Invasion~
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 4th September 2008 @ 01:01:58 PM AEST
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woo woo jenni girl, what a great write!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: ~Invasion~
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by FRANCO on
Thursday, 4th September 2008 @ 11:29:40 PM AEST
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Waoo....Jenni my friend,...
Well concealed intents love poem leaves the reader to race through his imagination. Brilliant my friend...
With love and respect,
FRANCO. |
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Re: ~Invasion~
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th September 2008 @ 02:15:54 AM AEST
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Great write Jenni. You've got a talent for
writing about all that passion you have up
your sleeve...
~Jesse |
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Re: ~Invasion~
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by navydocny on
Friday, 5th September 2008 @ 03:16:44 AM AEST
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Great flow...
Nicely written....
Makes you want more....
Keep up the strong work!
Steve |
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Re: ~Invasion~
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by deadwriter on
Saturday, 6th September 2008 @ 02:21:47 AM AEST
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Great piece. makes the mind race with thoughts.
deadwriter
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Re: ~Invasion~
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by Crow on
Saturday, 6th September 2008 @ 02:08:05 PM AEST
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I guess I`ll just have to read naughty, can`t get you to talk to me naughty...lol! woo-hoo
this is a little hot. Lane |
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Re: ~Invasion~
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by ZiggyB on
Thursday, 18th September 2008 @ 10:14:11 PM AEST
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| Wonder write - You have excellent skill for this |
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