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Oh lover
Contributed by
shelby
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Thursday, 4th September 2008 @ 08:58:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Oh lover, remember such passion.
Star shine dancing in eyes lust laden.
Night shadows danced perfumed with jasmine.
Sultry sweat of the summer night mixing with our own.
Oh lover, our union blessed by galaxies
in tune with earths cycle and spin
twisting us inside out, lustful whispers
breath heavy and born on wings of loves dance.
Oh lover, the breath of newness like the blush of dawn.
Rising over pine covered mountains, seemingly eternal.
Our colors spilling round and splashing in vivid display.
Catching our breath to inhale and know once more..
We are lovers......... unbound, restless
Copyright ©
shelby
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2008-09-04 08:58:44]
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Re: Oh lover
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by Crow on
Thursday, 4th September 2008 @ 09:09:12 AM AEST
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| I want a little of this stuff! lol! I shouldn`t be reading these writes, way to much passion. good work my friend and so glad to see you here..Lane |
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Re: Oh lover
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 4th September 2008 @ 09:16:20 AM AEST
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oh shelby this is so romantic and beautiful! more please!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Oh lover
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 4th September 2008 @ 09:40:10 AM AEST
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Michelle,
This is so romantically beautiful.
Oh my it gives me such happy
thoughts my dear friend *sigh*
A most delightful and uplifting
write that warms the heart of
the reader and leaves them
in such a blissful state~
Wonderful write my friend.
love n hugs,
sue m |
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Re: Oh lover
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by spooky on
Thursday, 4th September 2008 @ 10:26:27 AM AEST
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well written my friend,,passion,,love,,hope,,
what more could a person ask for,,,,love,,
a friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: Oh lover
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by FRANCO on
Thursday, 4th September 2008 @ 11:37:27 PM AEST
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Dear friend this is a very tenderly romantic poem..your smooth flow of words have created magic in this one.
wonderful my friend, thanks for sharing.
with love and respect,
FRANCO. |
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Re: Oh lover
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th September 2008 @ 02:10:31 AM AEST
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This is so romantic, so splendidly written. I
feel like all five of my senses were put to
good use in this, wonderfully done.
~Jesse |
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Re: Oh lover
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by NoSaint on
Saturday, 6th September 2008 @ 05:06:45 PM AEST
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shine on little star
Shari |
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