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Autumn in New England, With Dreams of Spring
Contributed by
wizard
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Wednesday, 3rd September 2008 @ 10:37:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
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A piddling trot with summer in forgotten slumber,
Tree tops dance to their muffled falling symphony;
Critters hoard as fleeing birds eagerly bid adieu.
Pines fritter spent needles and cones, flippantly.
Apple blossoms swag swaying limbs; seethed cider cools,
Pumpkins rouse dreaded scowls with candlelit smiles.
Rustling leaves rage, both overhead and underfoot,
With each crushing step a past fades; rampantly quick,
Yet ahead a smiling future awaits; promising.
A granite seat lends a resting ledge for a scribbled thought
As the ensuing frost upon us quietly waits, sneering,
Waiting to cover the cover left by the sleeping woods.
Sprouting dreams of fiddleheads in tender bloom,
Aside thoughts of the soft protracted days ahead;
Zephyrs fly passed a sun kissed pad … calling another line.
Naked limbs await the birds’ vernal tune – patience.
Thank not these birds for song, nor the sun for shine;
Chase not the butterfly’s unseen sweetened flutter,
For soon this dire season will end, frost will vacate,
Dying limbs will awaken, birds will rebuild and
Spring will again be at hand…warming, birthing .
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Re: Autumn in New England, With Dreams of Spring
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by FRANCO on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2008 @ 11:31:50 AM AEST
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Dear friend thank you for take me to a picture perfect world where everything looks like a blissful dream.
Beautifully penned with flawless flow of words.
Thank you for sharing.
with love and respect,
FRANCO. |
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Re: Autumn in New England, With Dreams of Spring
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2008 @ 11:47:10 AM AEST
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Hey Wiz, This is beautiful.... We don't have the fours seasons here on the islands but you have described something I would certainly love to experience... Thank you...
Jenni |
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Re: Autumn in New England, With Dreams of Spring
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by eeeitak on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2008 @ 12:12:49 PM AEST
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wiz! you are brilliant!
you left a beautiful image in my mind here,
thank you!
--Katie |
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Re: Autumn in New England, With Dreams of Spring
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2008 @ 12:19:40 PM AEST
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this is a masterpeice, i should know
i to am a native new englader,
i believe next door 2u if i'm correct,
your a bostonian amd i a native
rhode islander, this makes me
miss my home town, i do that
alot lately . I saw the tittle and
made a mad dash 2 open the
page.as always i'm never
dissapointed . . .
thanks also 4 your read, take care . . .
Ben |
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Re: Autumn in New England, With Dreams of Spring
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2008 @ 12:34:41 PM AEST
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beautiful and calming, excellent form which sits upon ones heart,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Autumn in New England, With Dreams of Spring
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by navydocny on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2008 @ 02:15:38 PM AEST
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Poetry is supposed to paint a portrait with words and you do exactly that....
Masterful as always!
Steve |
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Re: Autumn in New England, With Dreams of Spring
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2008 @ 10:06:03 PM AEST
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Yep, as I suspected, number 17.
Absolutely perfect. I hate that by overusing adjectives like "incredible," people have rendered them mediocre, when this is in fact an incredible piece of art.
Each word is delicious. Even if I didn't know previously what these scenes looked like, I would after reading this, through your eyes anyway.
Beautifully done.
Jesse |
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Re: Autumn in New England, With Dreams of Spring
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by Spike on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2008 @ 10:36:44 PM AEST
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Amen, brother. bring on the sneezes - I'm sick of colds and flus and freezing winds.
Beautiful word-embroidery of the seasons.
Spike |
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Re: Autumn in New England, With Dreams of Spring
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Saturday, 27th September 2008 @ 12:51:05 PM AEST
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A beautifully woven piece of poetry you
have here dear poet. The imagery is sensational.
I can visualize it all in my mind through the magic
of your pen my friend. Well done and thanks for
sharing your work with us.
hugs,
dreamer
who is enjoying a beautiful 28 degree day :-) |
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Re: Autumn in New England, With Dreams of Spring
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by karoody on
Wednesday, 8th October 2008 @ 07:32:29 AM AEST
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i must agree that you draw the picture well! your words let me share the experience with you. sounds like a beautiful place. thank you
kara |
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