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The Blackness
Contributed by
solidsnake116
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Wednesday, 3rd September 2008 @ 10:05:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I am every bullet that was ever fired into human flesh.
I am a sea of battered corpses rotting with disease.
I am the last tourtured thoughts of jews as they suffocated and died in the Nazi gas chambers.
I am the smell of blood as it pools and coagulates around shattered bodies.
I am the pain of the knife as it is plunged into your stomach.
I am all that is evil and dark in the world, all that is corrupt and vile.
I am a demon who walks the halls of eternity as i seek out my prey.
I am the reaper, and one day i will come for you.
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solidsnake116
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2008-09-03 10:05:05]
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Re: The Blackness
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by eeeitak on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2008 @ 12:14:52 PM AEST
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holy moly, this gave me chills!!
awesome, awesome, awesome!
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Re: The Blackness
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by wizard on
Thursday, 4th September 2008 @ 08:47:35 AM AEST
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so beautifully dark...
nicely done,
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Re: The Blackness
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by Muinanyere on
Thursday, 4th September 2008 @ 11:29:05 AM AEST
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| There is nothing wrong with writing dark poetry, I write mainly sad poetry myself. This is incredibly well written I too had shivers. |
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