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Different for Once
Contributed by
funnyface09
on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2008 @ 07:22:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I keep on running
Felt so free
I felt like I am flying
I had to leave
To reach my destiny
Time is not on my side
And the clock is ticking
I ran so fast
That I am almost out of breath
I wanted to reach the unreachable
I wanted to do the unthinkable
For once
I just wanted to be different
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Re: Different for Once
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ingredients on
Sunday, 7th April 2013 @ 04:28:16 PM AEST (User
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I see a lot of potential in this poem, my personal complaint is that sometimes while reading my eyes would clip on certain words.
"And the clock is ticking
I ran so fast
That I am almost out of breath"
I felt like these lines seem to break up the overall flow of your poem. |
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