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Up Up Away
Contributed by
shelby
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Tuesday, 2nd September 2008 @ 02:31:49 PM in AEST
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Big ol load of coffee beans,
all stacked on the floor.
Thought we would need a lumper
oh no, not this trip no sir.
The man said back her up
through the skinny door
I thought this would be interesting
up a ramp backwards we went.
Unhook the trailor next thing I know
up up up and away
there the trailor goes.
Straight up in the air,
beans sliding out
I thought what a way to do it
glad the tractor wasn't still hooked no doubt.
Av and Leshay took their window seats
always bright eyed
a better trucker duo one would never meet.
Up up away there the trailor goes
back down once more down the road we go.
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shelby
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Re: Up Up Away
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2008 @ 02:55:53 PM AEST
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I love how easily you are inspired to write,
this is great! The dog and cat give my heart
a little tug, that's so sweet that they're there
right with you. Great write!
~Jesse |
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Re: Up Up Away
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by LauraMary on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2008 @ 02:59:25 PM AEST
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I agree with Jesse.
Awesome job! |
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Re: Up Up Away
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2008 @ 03:18:09 PM AEST
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sounds like you had a great time!!
another great post michelle...keep writing,
wiz |
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Re: Up Up Away
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by ingeniusidiot on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2008 @ 08:59:56 PM AEST
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Its amazing how these places work sometimes and I agree with everyone that you can take any place or situation and put it into words. Av and Leshay look like theyre having a grand ol time..lol. Another great piece. Cant wait to be able to write with you again...miss you
hugs
rich |
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Re: Up Up Away
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2008 @ 01:13:26 AM AEST
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"lumper"?
Sound like you are having WAY too much fun!!! :) |
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Re: Up Up Away
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by NoSaint on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2008 @ 02:23:46 AM AEST
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| me thinks you are doing just what you were meant to do my friend... |
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Re: Up Up Away
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2008 @ 07:46:43 AM AEST
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Absolutely loved this light hearted write my friend. Wish I was there to join the fur kids in the window seat.
Peace and Love my friend
~Shannon |
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Re: Up Up Away
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2008 @ 06:51:04 PM AEST
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Cute, Michelle, cute. Oh, and I like the poem too. ;-)
Take care,
Tim |
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Re: Up Up Away
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th September 2008 @ 12:40:15 AM AEST
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Omigosh! The furkids are ADORABLE! lol
This was so delightful hun. What an adventure-- the life of a trucker.
And it is perfect that you can take the "kids" with you. Wherever you
are .. is home. *sigh* :)
Touching write, hun. Love that you keep in touch and post here
even while you're 'on the road'.
*hugs to you and the gang*
~ Breezy
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