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someone to believe in
Contributed by
spooky
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Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 11:55:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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No two lives are alike,,
no one can say how the other feels,
even twins have there faults,
they can't read minds,
we have people who say things ,
to get what they want,
they even do things,
to show they can,
why can't they be honest with themselfs,
why can't they say the truth what they realy feel,
why must they prove themself to others,
why can't they just be themselfs,
some of us believe in truth,,
some believe that honesty is the best answer,,
dont say if it's not true,,
don't do to hurt others,,
it's hard to believe in people,,
when they lie to you,
family ,,friends,,
who do you trust,,
craig s. meeks
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Re: someone to believe in
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2008 @ 12:25:13 AM AEST
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Your poem reminds so much of something i would write, it was just like reading my own ´work.
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Re: someone to believe in
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by Ambivalence on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2008 @ 02:46:06 PM AEST
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that's the thing...u cant trust anyone (sometimes not even urself)...that's a harsh truth. always be true to urself and others, that's all i know...nice write. take care
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Re: someone to believe in
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 4th September 2008 @ 10:56:08 AM AEST
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Craig,
Sadly this is the truth my friend.
Who does one trust? We can't
even trust our self at times. Honesty
is the best policy to one's self and to
others. A very well penned piece of
writing. Keep up the great work~
hugs,
sue m |
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Re: someone to believe in
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 9th September 2008 @ 07:22:48 AM AEST
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i just went through an experience with someone i knew for years, i trusted, huge mistake, excellent write here craig:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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