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Twilights Hour
Contributed by
shelby
on
Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 03:17:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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She may be the one on whispered wind
that floats gentle with the breeze.
Inside your open bedroom window and sit gentle near your side.
Once you smell the air tinted with hints of jasmine
you know she is around you then enticed with enchanted romance.
You feel her near your side and her breath upon your neck.
Her arms wrapping round your shoulders a hand rubbing your back.
Is she a dream or is she real, this is what you must discern
you find yourself aching for her in the twilights hour you yearn.
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shelby
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2008-09-01 15:17:47]
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Re: Twilights Hour
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 03:43:05 PM AEST
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A lovely write, Michelle...
The midnight hour does strange things, doesn't it?
Good to see you back..
Jenni |
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Re: Twilights Hour
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by navydocny on
Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 08:17:07 PM AEST
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Yearning is where I live....
I totally relate to this..
Great write!
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Re: Twilights Hour
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2008 @ 12:03:20 AM AEST
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Oh Michelle what a softly enchanting write! Too
beautiful for words!
You've set the stage with captivating allure. I love
your word choices for this. They are so subtly
bewitching. This was gorgeous!
Lovely ~
~ Breezy
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Re: Twilights Hour
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2008 @ 12:17:03 AM AEST
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| Shel this is short ...enticing the reader with every line. perfect, and just enough for the reader. love ya! Lane |
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Re: Twilights Hour
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2008 @ 11:00:32 AM AEST
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"She" sounds wonderful. You've created a beautiful piece of imagery and romance here, well done.
~Jesse |
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Re: Twilights Hour
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by ingeniusidiot on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2008 @ 08:43:26 PM AEST
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Utterly beatuiful....I know exactly what you are talking about...have spent many a twilight hour yearning for a loved one's touch. Once again beautifully written.
hugs
Rich |
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