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Be Trustworthy But Do Not Trust
Contributed by
desolantdreamer
on
Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 02:33:07 PM in AEST
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FriendshipPoetry
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Used, I feel so totally used
Always there for you, I never let you fall
I listened I helped if I could
Let you use me as a verbal punching bag when you felt low
Now it's I that needed the comforting
And you're no where to be found
Except to put me down
I feel cheated, betrayed
Why are you so cruel?
I needed help, not even more to be hurt over
What a terrible friend you are
I thought we were best friends
Serves me right, trusting someone else
Be trustworthy but do not trust, am I right?
That's a life lesson I learned here
All I can say now is goodbye
And thanks for nothing
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desolantdreamer
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2008-09-01 14:33:07]
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Re: Be Trustworthy But Do Not Trust
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by eeeitak on
Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 02:57:25 PM AEST
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i can feel your anger through this poem, and i'm very sorry that you had to go through the experience that inspired it! a beautiful poem indeed, you are very talented, friend! :)
--Katie |
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Re: Be Trustworthy But Do Not Trust
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by Ambivalence on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2008 @ 02:54:17 PM AEST
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| wow...such strong emotions. i hope u and ur 'friend' could work things out, if not then ur prolly better without him/her. u deserve better people to be by ur side. i can relate to this becuz i've written a poem ("Mistrust Trust") similar to ur theme, if u read it, you'll know what i mean...take care |
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