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Contributed by
eeeitak
on
Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 09:34:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Close your eyes
Shut off your mind
Just do what you feel,
Just feel.
Is this wrong?
Does that matter?
It's all real,
It's real.
Throw out your morals
Rip them to shreds
Just do what you crave,
Just crave.
Why should it matter what you've been taught?
If it's what you want
Don't try to behave,
Don't behave.
Follow your instincts;
Follow your gut;
Follow your heart--
STOP.
Stop following,
And create!
It may be wrong, frowned upon
But it will be,
Undoubtably,
You.
Copyright ©
eeeitak
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2008-09-01 09:34:27]
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Re: Follow
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 01:40:56 PM AEST
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Katie, this is awesome. It feels like a self
reflection, yet an inspirational plea at once.
Great job.
~Jesse |
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Re: Follow
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by eeeitak on
Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 02:12:22 PM AEST
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********NOTE!
that undoubtably there? yeah not a word. supposed to be undoubtedly. hahaha :D sorry guys!
thanks for reading! |
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Re: Follow
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by wizard on
Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 03:01:10 PM AEST
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nice post katie,
some good advice here,
wiz |
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Re: Follow
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by zenith66 on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2008 @ 10:25:34 AM AEST
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YOUR writing is amazingly uniqie and im loving it, your underlying emotional depth is stunning, i feel this is soo uplifting and ispiring. simply brililaint, a message that we all need to hear in these times, and your clearly a special person. i felt the repeat of certain words worked to great effect also, all in all an important. intellegient and enjoyable read!!
KEEP IT UP!! |
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Re: Follow
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by LauraMary on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2008 @ 02:16:13 PM AEST
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Faaaaabulous.
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