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You are me, and I am me, and you are nothing.
Contributed by
LauraMary
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Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 06:44:55 AM in AEST
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Stop thinking
close your mind
close your eyes
DON'T LET THEM HAVE YOU
Stop talking
close your mouth
close your ears
and LET me have you
Stop wishing
Close your dreamland
Close out all happiness
and let me HAVE you
Stop waiting
close out hope
let in truth
and let me have you!
Stop sleeping
It's not real.
Open the door.
AND NOW I HAVE YOU.
Copyright ©
LauraMary
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2008-09-01 06:44:55]
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Re: You are me, and I am me, and you are nothing.
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 08:32:40 AM AEST
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WOW! if you've obtained him, i hope he's
got the good sense, never to leave, this
heart racing material . . .
Ben |
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Re: You are me, and I am me, and you are nothing.
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 01:20:26 PM AEST
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Hmmm...very interesting and very clever use of words. I liked it.
Thanks,
Tim
:-)
P.S. I like the title too. |
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Re: You are me, and I am me, and you are nothing.
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2008 @ 11:57:57 AM AEST
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awesome post LM,
i like this a lot,
wiz
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