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ball and chain
Contributed by
polaris773
on
Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 01:32:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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At this pace I'l never get there
With every step I take
The weight of your ball and chain get heavier
All the time I am just trying to get closer to you
You let me get so close
But only closer to what used to be you
Now you’re growing and I stay the same
Except for the graying of my hair and soul
I just want you to be here with me
The bruises on my ankle and heart are starting to get unbearable
The pain of being without you is still worse
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2008-09-01 01:32:42]
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Re: ball and chain
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by redsleeve on
Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 04:22:44 AM AEST
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"the bruises on my ankle......unbearable"
i like the idea of the ball and chain. good post. |
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Re: ball and chain
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by eeeitak on
Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 09:39:44 AM AEST
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| This is really cool, and very original. You're a very talented poet :D |
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Re: ball and chain
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by wizard on
Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 11:02:11 AM AEST
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nice post,
wiz |
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Re: ball and chain
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by LauraMary on
Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 03:28:01 PM AEST
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I really like this.
Great write. |
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