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The Sun,The Rain,The Hope ,The Pain

Contributed by amt on Sunday, 31st August 2008 @ 04:59:26 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

it started to rain
when i was playing in the sun
i left the game
and i started to run

i ran so hard
i ran so fast
i dodged the lightning
i ran like mad

and i knew there's a place not so far away
where the sun is still shining bright
i wasn't weak to give in to the rain
i knew i had to fight

i ran so hard
i ran so fast
i dodged the lightning
and i stopped at last

now i wondered if there is really a place not so far away
where the sun is still shining bright
giving up doesn't always mean you are weak
but strong enough to lose the fight

i was standing in the rain now
feeling my skin soak each drop of it
though i was getting wet all the time
but now i was kind of loving it

wierd it seemed to me at first
but then i started to realize
the picture was crystal clear
as soon as i closed my eyes

it was not the rain
it was the shelter from the rain
hope hurts more
far more than the pain

Copyright © amt ... [ 2008-08-31 16:59:26]
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Re: The Sun,The Rain,The Hope ,The Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by eeeitak on Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 09:42:54 AM AEST
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Wow. This is absolutely incredible.
I don't even know what more to say,
but this is one of my favorite poem I've read now.
Very well done :D

--Katie

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