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What's next
Contributed by
spooky
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Sunday, 31st August 2008 @ 01:01:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I watch things happen everyday,,
I hear the words that hurt others,,,
I see the abuse on children,,
why do we let it happen,,
who am i to say,,
when do my words count,,
who will listen,,
to whom does it really care,,
so much hurt for one to bear,,
too much suffering for one heart to take,,
there's so much in this world,,
when will these words ever count,,
wars,, abuse,,neglect,,
rape,,murder,,what more ,,
will one word matter to any one,,
or will it take everyone's word?
sometimes it's as if no one cares,,
one day it might be too late,,
for one single word to be said,,
then all we can do is watch,,
and listen,,and see what happens next,,
craig s. meeks
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spooky
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Re: What's next
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 31st August 2008 @ 01:27:31 PM AEST
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A really moving write, Craig.... Leaves one pondering....
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Re: What's next
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by wizard on
Sunday, 31st August 2008 @ 03:02:02 PM AEST
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nicely done,
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Re: What's next
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by Ambivalence on
Sunday, 31st August 2008 @ 03:59:06 PM AEST
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| wonderful poem...it seems the world is so far away from peace even wen we want better lives. but keep speaking out for the truth, MLK made a difference...take care |
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Re: What's next
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by eeeitak on
Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 03:21:17 PM AEST
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i really love this...
it deals with a struggle many people go through,
and you address it in a truly beautiful way.
you, friend, are a strong writer, a very talented poet.
keep writing, your words do matter :D
--Katie |
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