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Why am I alive.
Contributed by
damien
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Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 11:25:00 AM in AEST
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I wanna go from alive and kicking to non-existant,
I don't wanna live no more feeling out of place like a mutant.
I wanna step out of this shell forever and see,
whether you still would be able to recognize me,
coz all that would be left after I step out,
would be a body which is of heart and soul devoid.
Never did I want to lead a meaningless life,
for which with blood and sweat I have to strive.
All this hard work, would in the end amount to what?
A 7x4 piece of land in some burial lot.
What are you doing with this life that you cherish?
I don't see the difference between now and when I'll perish.
Copyright ©
damien
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2003-03-18 11:25:00]
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Re: Why am I alive.
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 11:46:13 AM AEST
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I wonder what can have happened to you to make you feel this way. Try to stay positive and remember that if things are as bad as they have ever been - things can only get better.
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Re: Why am I alive.
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by Damien on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 12:03:39 PM AEST
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| Its not that anythings happened to make me feel this way. In fact life's always been pretty good and off late , it could'nt be better. It's just that I don't understand the purpose behind it. Anyway THANK YOU very much for your encouragement-Damien. |
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Re: Why am I alive.
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by RealCrystal on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 08:05:38 PM AEST
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I know how u feel
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Re: Why am I alive.
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 01:43:44 AM AEST
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This is so sad!!! You express your emotions well.
I'm not sure if you listen to country but Shania Twain says it best.Up up up can only go up from here. Iv been listening to it often this last month.
Hug 4 u!!
Michelle |
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Re: Why am I alive.
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by Ivy on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 08:23:07 AM AEST
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| A very nice write. Something that makes people think and very well said with lot of emotions. Good write Damien, keep it up. Ivy |
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Re: Why am I alive.
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by tease_whizz on
Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 12:15:42 PM AEST
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| wow, i can really relate to this. its not like life is bad, just like there feels as if theres no reason to it. read my poem 'Inhale...Exhale' if you like, its about the same sort of thing. great write, keep them coming, Kate x |
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Re: Why am I alive.
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by Bizzy on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 12:28:26 AM AEST
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| Damien, I'm glad I finally found time to look for your home page. Your question is so important. This is a feeling of spiritual emptiness, of not being complete. We have to feel uncomfortable with the way we are before we are interested in looking for a better way to live. I believe you have to look to God for the answer to a higher purpose of life. Ask God to show you the way. Whatever He has created you for will be what gives you the greater satisfaction with your life in the long term, though it may be difficult. Bizzy |
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Re: Why am I alive.
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 25th August 2003 @ 06:15:52 PM AEST
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| great write! ivy |
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