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Tomatoe
Contributed by
PlainFreshRain
on
Sunday, 31st August 2008 @ 02:17:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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The field was earthy and clean
(sumptuous soil, rattle the kettle)
Cut from nothing as blunt as a machine
From there came forth tomatoes
And many a nettle, many a tale to tell
(rain, poured out like the oil on unfermented cakes)
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PlainFreshRain
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2008-08-31 02:17:19]
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Re: Tomatoe
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 31st August 2008 @ 06:09:40 AM AEST
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Short and inticing. A wonderful choice of words. Magical and simplisitic in it's beautiful and precise delivery.
BRAVO!
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Re: Tomatoe
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 31st August 2008 @ 06:11:38 AM AEST
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It's been awhile. Nice work, the images are quite refreshing.
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Re: Tomatoe
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by Puppy on
Thursday, 2nd October 2008 @ 10:52:04 PM AEST
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hey connie!!!!
great write, i enjoyed very much!
see you soon!
Puppy :)
aka your lil sis x |
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Re: Tomatoe
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by laststarontheleft on
Friday, 12th March 2010 @ 09:17:40 AM AEST
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If I close my eyes, I can almost hear your velvety accent reciting this lovely piece.... :)
Very, very nice indeed!
Star x x x |
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