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Fall Out Love Poem

Contributed by liamleash on Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 09:58:11 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

My hands pressed against my conscience
Like I’ll never see you again.
But it’s only till tomorrow then we’ll be back together.
Meeting in the moonlight
Holding each other all night
Sitting on a park bench at four in the morning,
Watching the moon mourning the loss of light
But we’re young and invincible when were with each other.

There’s a light on at my home when I’m asleep
So you know someone’s always here for you.
Cupid cocked back his arrow and let it fly,
Missed his shot
Skimmed my heart but hit the apple on my head.
Must be why I’m in the literal form of love instead.

I’ll hold my breath so we’ll be together forever
When I see you it’s all in vain because you knock me speechless.
All the moments we spend in each others company
Makes up for the silence.
I can tell what your thinking and I feel the same.
But it’s these undercover love occasions
Which make me feel like I am going insane
Knowing during the day I cant be with you
Because your lying next to him.
Who said love stories had to go somewhere,
Not that we care because one day we’ll be with each other.

Your charcoal hand print left a mark on my heart
This has to stop at some point it’s tearing me apart.
You leave a make-up mark on my pillow
So I’m not sleeping alone tonight.
Midnight love missions
To avoid being seen.
The silence in the earth when we kiss says it all.
So I know it’s all worth it

Copyright Â© liamleash ... [ 2008-08-30 21:58:11]
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Re: Fall Out Love Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by navydocny on Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 11:55:52 PM AEST
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A heartfelt plea....
The end flowed and came together better I thought.
Very good articulation at how confusing it is to try to be with someone.....
Good Poem!

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