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Haunting You.
Contributed by
miseria
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Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 09:23:22 PM in AEST
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Sinister thoughts are hiding in your tears..
Forgiving words are only spoken in vengeance.
Your hate has been reincarnated
In the form of three common words..
"I love You".
Further down in the seas of confusion,
The only remaining echoes are drowning in the maelstrom..
The echoes of our hearts
That scream in agony and regret..
"Haunting You."
Of course, we changed..
So obviously, we both forgot..
Beginnings are buried alive..
We both said "Forever"..
Forever came too soon..
Copyright ©
miseria
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2008-08-30 21:23:22]
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Re: Haunting You.
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by navydocny on
Sunday, 31st August 2008 @ 12:33:49 AM AEST
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Great write!
It has a lot of the Yin and Yang that is love and pain...
Keep it up! |
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Re: Haunting You.
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by ZiggyB on
Sunday, 31st August 2008 @ 02:51:02 AM AEST
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The question of why...will always haunt you.
Good write |
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Re: Haunting You.
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by redsleeve on
Sunday, 31st August 2008 @ 05:04:11 AM AEST
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...Further down in the seas of confusion,
The only remaining echoes are drowning in the maelstrom..
The echoes of our hearts
That scream in agony and regret..
"Haunting You."...
really liked this part
great post! |
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Re: Haunting You.
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by eeeitak on
Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 12:56:39 PM AEST
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this is great, deep and relatable. fabulous write, really well done friend!! :D
--Katie |
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Re: Haunting You.
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by Alisteal_Rayne on
Tuesday, 16th September 2008 @ 04:55:57 PM AEST
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| Wonderfully deep and 3-d |
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Re: Haunting You.
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by AnthonyGoodwinJnr on
Monday, 21st September 2009 @ 03:55:39 AM AEST
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| Deep, dark and full of loss. A moving and clever piece. Well Done |
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