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Addicted to the Evil in You
Contributed by
Blake
on
Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 02:38:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Her words like morphine
Eyes like fire
Body so seductive
Suck me in, finish me now
Evil little angel
Leaves me gasping
Blood red halo
Soak you in sin
Dark room eyes
Devil in the corner
Whispering to me
Embrace the addiction
Her words like morphine
Eyes turning back
Out of body experience
In her clutch I’ve conformed
Copyright ©
Blake
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2008-08-30 14:38:59]
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Re: Addicted to the Evil in You
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 02:50:06 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC....Feel free to show more of your work....
NIce imagery....scary tho..lol...
Jenni |
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Re: Addicted to the Evil in You
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by wizard on
Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 03:05:53 PM AEST
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nice write, it definitely has a 'dark' feel to it,
welcome,
wiz |
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Re: Addicted to the Evil in You
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by eeeitak on
Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 04:22:15 PM AEST
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This is AWESOME!
You definitely have talent,
the whole vibe that comes with this poem is just so creepy but very cool.
Keep on writing, man!
--Katie |
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Re: Addicted to the Evil in You
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by breezyweezy on
Sunday, 31st August 2008 @ 10:52:55 AM AEST
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| welcome to YPDC, nice write,i hvent seen a lot of dark poetry in a wile |
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Re: Addicted to the Evil in You
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by elle on
Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 04:19:48 PM AEST
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| "her words like morphine" this is powerful, soulful, definitely a keeper. . . peace. elle |
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Re: Addicted to the Evil in You
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by maggot on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2008 @ 02:17:39 PM AEST
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sweet poem man definately a dark feeling to it
keep writing you have a talent |
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