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The Haunted House
Contributed by
eeeitak
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Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 06:23:23 AM in AEST
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The bloody feline stalks forward
Purrs purrs purrs purrs purrs
Her fur was burnt off
She wants revenge,
She wants your blood
These aren't monsters, these aren't ghosts
These are bodies, bodies, bodies fall
Crawl back up and walk tall
They sleep in these walls
The bodies are all around you
And you are in their house
Get out! Get out! Get out!
They'll get you! Get out! Get out!
These aren't monsters, these aren't ghosts
These are bodies, bodies, bodies fall
Crawl back up and walk tall
They sleep in these walls
The bodies are all around you
And you are in their house
The frail pale woman calls from the tub
Drop drop drop drop drop
Her God didn't pull her up
She wants revenge
She wants your blood
Get out! Get out! Get out!
They'll get you! Get out! Get out!
These aren't monsters, these aren't ghosts
These are bodies, bodies, bodies fall
Crawl back up and walk tall
They sleep in these walls
The bodies are all around you
And you are in their house
Get out! Get out! Get out!
They'll get you! Get out! Get out!
Get out! Get out! Get out!
Get out! Get out! Get out!
Get out! Get out! Get out!
Get out! Get out! Get out!
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eeeitak
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Re: The Haunted House
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 09:01:25 AM AEST
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The bodies are all around you
And you are in their house . . .
The above verse did it for me,
most chilling in it's relentless
intrusion on one's reality. A
convincing testament to an
invading entity that's is half
nightmare and half day dream.
very involving to the reader . . .
Ben . . .
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Re: The Haunted House
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by Muinanyere on
Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 02:43:01 PM AEST
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| very eerie, this is a great write, sorry you had such a creepy nightmare |
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Re: The Haunted House
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by wizard on
Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 11:54:23 PM AEST
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nicely done,
i meant have a nightmare tonight now...
wiz |
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Re: The Haunted House
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by ZiggyB on
Sunday, 31st August 2008 @ 03:16:12 AM AEST
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Damn! Almost gave me a daymare. (Ha Ha)
Heck of a dream here. |
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Re: The Haunted House
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 31st August 2008 @ 06:28:12 AM AEST
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This is a very interesting coincidence I had a nightmare just moments ago and now I am commenting on it.
This is performance art, not poetry.
SCM |
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Re: The Haunted House
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 5th September 2008 @ 06:49:43 AM AEST
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creepy :O ...it just pulls one along...
hugs n' love nessa |
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