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My Artistic Talents Will Dazzle You.
Contributed by
LauraMary
on
Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 04:41:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Drag it straight.
Slash on top.
Spill. NO. Stop.
Courage, I want it.
I want blood.
Inside to drop, drip, drop.
Take out the jagged edged crayon.
And try and re-draw the red line.
The color is faded, but I see it.
I want it darker. I NEED it to shine.
Redo and redo and redo.
Scratching on over the surface.
Thinking of why I am drawing.
This picture. WHAT IS IT'S PURPOSE?
Then I stop thinking all together.
Just flick the red pen cross the pale page.
Making corrections, making life better.
Trying to turn off my rage.
I have never been a good artist.
Just scribbles and scrabbles of light pink.
This time I'm sure I'll be better.
This time I'll be drawing dark ink!
My drawing is making my head rush.
Changing my life all together.
Making me confused, happy, mad angry, sad
Crazed, ALIVE. Making me feel...pleasure.
Until I stepped out of this dreamland.
Stared at the paint on the page.
The paint that I stole gladly while it was running blue
through a circular cage.
I wonder if I liked being blue.
I wonder if it liked to run.
I wonder if it was just dying to leave
If it was tired and wanted it done.
Did I do my blood a favor?
Causing it's flow to desist.
I've decided I no longer care anymore.
Just keep dragging the blade cross my wrist.
I am a true artist.
My talents will DAZZLE you.
I am a true artist.
My talents may fighten you.
Copyright ©
LauraMary
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2008-08-30 04:41:44]
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Re: My Artistic Talents Will Dazzle You.
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by wizard on
Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 06:07:06 AM AEST
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wow... that was pretty deep, it read with such a sense of urgency... nice job,
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Re: My Artistic Talents Will Dazzle You.
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 08:46:28 AM AEST
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" I am a true artist. My talents
will DAZZLE you. I am a true
artist. My talents may fighten
you." You are a true gienus,
an artist of deep emptional
ambiguity, i love your intensity
in conveying your writting,
it speaks for itself and needs
no interpentation, all one has
to do is to sucomb, to it's
enjoyment . most lovely work.
Ben . . .
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Re: My Artistic Talents Will Dazzle You.
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by eeeitak on
Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 11:56:47 AM AEST
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| All your metaphors here just amaze me. This poem is so great, lady :D |
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Re: My Artistic Talents Will Dazzle You.
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by Hakiokusaken on
Wednesday, 17th September 2008 @ 07:02:01 PM AEST
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this was a great write.... one of the best i've read in a long time.... keep them comin... you are a true artist!!!
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