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A Favor To Ask

Contributed by Savannah on Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 09:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

You ask me how I interpret you
And then you tell me how you interpret me
You tell me that you want three kids
And you don't care if they're all girls
Even though you do want a boy
You say that you have feelings too
You're not just a jock
And it's hard to tell if you're serious or not
But either way, I have a favor to ask
Could you please get out of my head?

Your hair has gotten a little long
Especially in the back
And it's pretty obvious that
You haven't shaved in a little while
A word I would use to describe you
Would have to be scruffy
And a little unkept, but in a good way
Because you’re just as cute as always
So I still have a favor to ask
Could you please get out of my sight?

You flirt with me shamelessly
Like there are no tomorrows or consequences
Tripping me as I walk through the house
Resting your hand on my knees
As we sit side by side
Slinking your arm around me
Nodding suggestively at dark empty rooms
Then erupting into a giant smile
And I can’t help but have a favor to ask
Could you please get out of my heart?

Copyright Â© Savannah ... [ 2003-03-18 09:35:00]
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Re: A Favor To Ask (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 10:22:57 AM AEST
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very good write .. i can relate

Shari

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