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Blood
Contributed by
net
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Thursday, 28th August 2008 @ 09:27:46 AM in AEST
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Hope has just flown away
As you rush out from my life
This wasted body aches all day
Remembering your gentle touch
Now that my body divides
Soul against meat and blood
Hatred fills my essence
But my hands still shake with lust
This sun covered in hazy pictures
A landscape full of spikes
My blood covers your features
And still you sleep sound all night
These colors of loyalty and trust
Slowly fade away in time
Yet your audience still cheers
And your frame keeps its charm
Feathers fly around in this room
Where salt and sugar combines
Stains left scattered on the floor
Will not be cleansed until you rot
So beautiful and fair
You walk down a path of blood
With carcasses left bloating in the sun
Eyes still wet, hearts torn apart
Care to join me in this game
In which I show my demise
A story of you and me
And of an unfulfilled desire
Copyright ©
net
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Re: Blood
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by wizard on
Thursday, 28th August 2008 @ 12:11:15 PM AEST
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great post,
nicely done,
wiz |
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Re: Blood
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by jenniferstein2006 on
Thursday, 28th August 2008 @ 12:26:03 PM AEST
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| real good |
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Re: Blood
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 28th August 2008 @ 09:45:40 PM AEST
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| truly a good poem |
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Re: Blood
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by navydocny on
Thursday, 28th August 2008 @ 11:07:48 PM AEST
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Yes there is always pain involved with love, but it is part of it all...
Good Poem..
Keep it up! |
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Re: Blood
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by LauraMary on
Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 09:57:48 AM AEST
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Wow.
Well done. |
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Re: Blood
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by eeeitak on
Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 09:45:59 AM AEST
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"Now that my body divides
Soul against meat and blood
Hatred fills my essence
But my hands still shake with lust"
My favorite part.
You really are fantastic! |
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Re: Blood
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by net on
Monday, 1st August 2011 @ 02:18:53 PM AEST
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| it's been hard for me to return to this site and read these works again, for they remind me of a difficult time yet to be overcome. but i have to say your comments are one of the reasons i still manage to survive as i am, as a depressed soul. for pain is just unbearable, without some sympathy from others. thank you... |
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