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The Endless Journey of Onerous Times
Contributed by
angel_blue
on
Thursday, 28th August 2008 @ 08:44:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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This endless journey of onerous times
An avenue tediously travelled....
I wander senselessly, bewitched and feeble
Weary, engulfed and bedazzed....
Soo lost is your child, this body, mind and soul
Unsure of where life's leading....
The flesh worn and aching, battered and breaking
The heart so shattered and bleeding....
All feeling has left for I'm hollow inside
An empty chassis that once held hope
Failing to fullfill your grand INCLINATION
I turn to a path easier to cope....
Bloat mt heart once again with your desire,
Enrapture my soul with your will....
Speak softly Great Deity so your child may hear
Lead me back to your boundless hill....
This endless journey of onerous times
Will take a lifetime for me to travel,
Yet in your embrace I'll slowly feel whole
No longer obscured, barren and baffled!
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2008-08-28 08:44:01]
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Re: The Endless Journey of Onerous Times
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by zenith66 on
Thursday, 28th August 2008 @ 10:15:03 AM AEST
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| wow a lovley piece here to get my teeth into, im loving how you take a truly universwal struggle and turn it into someting beautifulla and poetic, i thinkk we have all felt like this, glad your okay now, at least something good came of it tho, this uplifting wirte, well done keep it up!! |
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Re: The Endless Journey of Onerous Times
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by navydocny on
Friday, 29th August 2008 @ 03:57:21 AM AEST
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Great poem...
fitting into someone's grand plan can be quite daunting....
I think you explain that well... |
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