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You'll get what you deserve.
Contributed by
AchingSoul
on
Thursday, 28th August 2008 @ 03:57:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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The time you took away from me-
Will never be restored.
Those endless nights-
Pacing back and forth.
For my fate is not at my will,
And this heart my never heal...
I shall get my vengeance, someday.
then,you too,will fade away.
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AchingSoul
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2008-08-28 03:57:23]
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Re: You'll get what you deserve.
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by iodinelove on
Thursday, 28th August 2008 @ 06:31:31 AM AEST
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vengeance only opens old wounds, and love is never enough...
let it go ^_^
always, abraham |
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Re: You'll get what you deserve.
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by allforyou on
Thursday, 28th August 2008 @ 09:10:30 AM AEST
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i know what you mean. its like damn--all that time, wasted. All that pointless frustration. But do know, it feels much better to let go than to get even.
keep writing,
kara |
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Re: You'll get what you deserve.
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by Saaaraxxx16 on
Thursday, 28th August 2008 @ 10:34:53 AM AEST
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dayumn. that boy better watch his back. =] great write.. and i hope your heart heals fast =)
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Re: You'll get what you deserve.
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 29th August 2008 @ 09:55:42 AM AEST
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ooooooooooo .. I am completely and TOTALLY in love
with that last line!! Exemplary!!!!
It is often quite hard to put into words what happens when
we are spurned or jilted or let down, or however we want
to describe what happens when we part with love, (for
whatEVER reason). But you have done, in very few lines
an outstanding job of expressing just that! I applaud your
seemingly effortless work! Exceptional!!
~ Breezy
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Re: You'll get what you deserve.
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by tres_estrellas on
Monday, 17th November 2008 @ 06:34:36 AM AEST
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| I can relate to this. I really like your work. Can't wait to see more! |
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