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~Dancing In The Dark~
Contributed by
Jenni_K
on
Wednesday, 27th August 2008 @ 01:14:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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~~^~~
Snuck into my party, feeling full of gloom.
Looked for and found me, in a little deserted room.
I was so very surprised, or should I say, in shock!
I told you this wasn’t smart and we can’t turn back the clock.
But here we are together, dancing in the dark
The glow in my eyes providing the only spark..
Forgetting all around us, as I hold you so tight.
Knowing this is wrong, makes it all seem so right.
Looking all around me, stealing a sweet kiss,
You know fully well, those sexy lips I miss.
Your hands start roaming all across my back,
Sending shivers down my spine, through my top of black.
You pull me towards you, closer to your chest,
And I feel you shiver as your skin touches my breasts.
I feel your warm breath as it caresses my face,
While your fingers slowly undo my bra of lace.
Our bodies still moving in unison, swaying to the beat,
“Sweetheart,” I say to you, “We have to be discreet.”
You release me slowly and turn towards the door,
Locking it before returning and laying me on the floor.
Here you undress me slowly, eyes savoring my every curve,
Lips kissing me all over, touching my every nerve.
You bring me to such ecstasy while I control my need to scream,
Oh darling, my darling, if only this wasn’t a dream!!
~~^~~
Copyright ©
Jenni_K
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2008-08-27 13:14:10]
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Re: ~Dancing In The Dark~
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 27th August 2008 @ 01:21:00 PM AEST
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wow jenni, this is pretty steamy...lol...nice job...sometimes the dances in the dark are the best ones,
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Re: ~Dancing In The Dark~
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by Ambivalence on
Wednesday, 27th August 2008 @ 01:40:29 PM AEST
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very very...romantic/full of passion/creative. ur words just paint a clear picture of wats going on (which i mite hav to close my eyes for haha jk). who knows, ur fantasy/dreams can become reality. lovely write. take care
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Re: ~Dancing In The Dark~
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 27th August 2008 @ 01:41:07 PM AEST
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jen, you did it again.
I luv how you do this.
You take control of the mind and then the grande finally.
Awesome.
Huggs, smiles, blessings,
emy |
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Re: ~Dancing In The Dark~
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 27th August 2008 @ 02:28:21 PM AEST
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girl you had me goin with this one...... well written steamy and sensual all my favorite things whooooo hooooooooo.......
hugs
Michelle |
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Re: ~Dancing In The Dark~
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 27th August 2008 @ 02:47:28 PM AEST
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A true beauty we have here,
so it is only a dream there
the best kind are they not ?
another lovely work as always
Jenn, keep the ink flowing
my friend .and thank you also
for your read . . .
Ben . . . |
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Re: ~Dancing In The Dark~
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 27th August 2008 @ 03:12:39 PM AEST
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"Whoa maaan!!!!" Oh darling, my darling, if only this wasn’t a dream!!
Jenni, this poem is awesome! Sensual, steamy, hot, & naughty. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. The imagery made this very real. Definitely deserves more than a five.
Too cool!
Thank you,
Tim
:-)
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Re: ~Dancing In The Dark~
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 27th August 2008 @ 10:26:48 PM AEST
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Holy heck Jenni! This is such a steamy and naughty write.
You've outdone yourself with this one. It's so completely
sensual and provocative.
A magnificent display of desire unleashed!! Beautiful, hun.
Remarkably stirring ~
~ Breezy |
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Re: ~Dancing In The Dark~
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by NoSaint on
Thursday, 28th August 2008 @ 12:05:41 AM AEST
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steamy, dreamy well written
Shari |
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Re: ~Dancing In The Dark~
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by Crow on
Thursday, 28th August 2008 @ 12:07:06 AM AEST
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Jenni this is so hot" you are naughty" lol!
I love it. Lane |
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Re: ~Dancing In The Dark~
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by FRANCO on
Thursday, 28th August 2008 @ 12:07:55 AM AEST
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This is indeed a very amazing dream, and you have have painted so beautifully; I wish and pray this dream to continue and turn out to be true.
Jenni my friend you are truly amazing.
with lots of love,
FRANCO |
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Re: ~Dancing In The Dark~
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 28th August 2008 @ 10:39:25 PM AEST
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| wow This is wonderful |
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Re: ~Dancing In The Dark~
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by deadwriter on
Friday, 29th August 2008 @ 02:55:56 AM AEST
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Extremely steamy piece of writing Jenni.
Great Job.
deadwriter
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Re: ~Dancing In The Dark~
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by julianasmommy on
Friday, 29th August 2008 @ 11:51:03 AM AEST
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WOW!
as you said to me, this i truly mean,
you have a HUGE FAN,
just by me reading this one poem i can already tell, i'm going to love them all.
phenomenal! i love it. it's sooo good i couldn't stop reading. very erotic and sensual |
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Re: ~Dancing In The Dark~
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 29th August 2008 @ 01:42:31 PM AEST
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Whew! Jenni! I felt like I should stop but I just kept right on reading, lol. Well done, a terrific dream and an even better poem.
~Jesse |
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Re: ~Dancing In The Dark~
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by ZiggyB on
Friday, 29th August 2008 @ 10:08:50 PM AEST
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DAMN Jenni...
I had to go jump in the shower. (Ha Ha)
Excellent write.
~Stephan
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Re: ~Dancing In The Dark~
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 9th September 2008 @ 05:41:05 AM AEST
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did the 'fantasy' topic give me a hint? no! you have caught me again lol, most excellent write!!!!!!!!
hugs n' love nessa |
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