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Indelible Mark
Contributed by
Ambivalence
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Wednesday, 27th August 2008 @ 01:09:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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I have not told you this in quite a while now,
but when I think of nothing else, I think of you
and when I think of everything else, I still think of you.
We have not seen each other for so long either.
When I am with you, I become happy, yet weaker,
and when I am without you, I feel miserable, yet stronger.
Unfortunately, time has separated us by a lot.
Til this day, I still need you as a good friend,
but everyday, I want you so badly as a lover.
Whether you know my life-long secret or not,
and no matter how much my brittle heart bends,
my hopeless love for you, my friend, will burn forever.
Copyright ©
Ambivalence
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2008-08-27 13:09:49]
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Re: Indelible Mark
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 27th August 2008 @ 01:37:27 PM AEST
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nicely done,
wiz |
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Re: Indelible Mark
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 27th August 2008 @ 01:51:12 PM AEST
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WOW!! I can truly relate... Good write... I'll not say any more..lol
Jenni |
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Re: Indelible Mark
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by navydocny on
Thursday, 28th August 2008 @ 12:44:05 AM AEST
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Love truly leaves an indelible mark..
Great poem...
Keep it Up! |
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Re: Indelible Mark
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 9th September 2008 @ 11:29:09 AM AEST
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this is beautiful, i wish all the best for you, and that someday love and you reside in the same room,
hugs n' love nessa |
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