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Overly Smitten
Contributed by
wizard
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Wednesday, 27th August 2008 @ 03:27:12 AM in AEST
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A simple sigh, a message sent,
A touch unfelt as dreams repent.
Your voice unheard, yet singing so;
Your eyes unseen, yet steal the show.
Attracted by the written word
As smite flows to its own accord,
And somehow it has found a way
For thoughts to rebound every day.
Enamored by these simple dreams
As foolish as it sometimes seems,
But a month, yet volumes spoken,
Holding simple dreams unbroken.
Now this veiling verse shall speak
Of matters cloaked that shall not leak.
A tender kiss goes unfulfilled
As hopes upon the page are spilled.
Beautiful darling blushing muse,
Set at ease your troubled blues;
Beautiful darling, please don’t fret
Our precious limits are preset.
Copyright ©
wizard
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2008-08-27 03:27:12]
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Re: Overly Smitten
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by navydocny on
Wednesday, 27th August 2008 @ 04:24:00 AM AEST
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Outstanding...
Masterful.....
I am truly inspired! |
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Re: Overly Smitten
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 27th August 2008 @ 04:54:27 AM AEST
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Wow Wiz. She's a lucky girl. Your talent goes
unmatched, every line is beautiful and
sweet.
Your poems reach back to another era, when
people were more romantic and cared about
the written word.
Always an honor to read your written words.
~Jesse |
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Re: Overly Smitten
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 27th August 2008 @ 11:34:31 AM AEST
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Aww Wiz, this is superb.... It's something I'm sure lots can identify with..
Jenni |
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Re: Overly Smitten
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 28th August 2008 @ 12:14:20 AM AEST
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A lovely ensemble of emotions
to woo the core of one worthy of
anothers love . . .
Ben |
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Re: Overly Smitten
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by NoSaint on
Thursday, 28th August 2008 @ 12:15:18 AM AEST
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well written
Shari |
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Re: Overly Smitten
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by allforyou on
Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 07:04:39 AM AEST
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this has a really nice flow to it.
-kara |
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Re: Overly Smitten
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by eeeitak on
Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 03:13:00 PM AEST
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this is wonderful,
with such a classic style and perfect flow.
well done, as always, wiz!
--Katie |
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Re: Overly Smitten
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2008 @ 06:09:17 AM AEST
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| Romance at its best! |
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Re: Overly Smitten
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 9th September 2008 @ 06:30:22 AM AEST
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this is beautiful!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Overly Smitten
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by Solomon on
Friday, 12th September 2008 @ 11:09:42 PM AEST
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I prefer poetry that has both meaning and ryhme. I love the way this flows and it displays a place that we most certainly all have been.
Very nice. I guess it's perfectly fine that people think I'm you. :)
-Solomon |
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Re: Overly Smitten
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by Jord on
Thursday, 27th August 2009 @ 01:24:15 PM AEST
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| Fragile and beautiful. Very complete and rounded. |
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