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A Fairy Tale for Adults
Contributed by
solidsnake116
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Tuesday, 26th August 2008 @ 09:53:52 AM in AEST
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God.
People say God is everywhere,
but thats just another way of saying he's nowhere.
God isn't with you when you die.
Only the darkness waiting to take you.
God isn't there when you have to bury your loved ones.
Only a gaping hole you can never fill.
God isn't there when you lose your will to live.
Only the will to die remains.
Copyright ©
solidsnake116
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2008-08-26 09:53:52]
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Re: A Fairy Tale for Adults
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 26th August 2008 @ 09:56:20 AM AEST
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quite a controversial piece, i think you did well with it... so much to mull over... nice job
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Re: A Fairy Tale for Adults
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by zenith66 on
Wednesday, 27th August 2008 @ 08:56:48 AM AEST
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hey this is definantly controversion lol, but try to stop bieng so negative, i no exacly what you mean but, there is so much more good in the world then bad, its all about accepting whats coming and getting along with now, just live for the moment, look to the sky in awe at where you are my friend, at who you are, love those around you and have No regrets,(oh im not a god person either lol) but i do believe in someting, something of intellegent creation has weaved this universe imo, anyway nice peice!!!
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Re: A Fairy Tale for Adults
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by maggot on
Monday, 8th September 2008 @ 02:19:24 PM AEST
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controversail write
you did a really god job
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