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We are
Contributed by
DukeW
on
Tuesday, 26th August 2008 @ 04:48:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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We live, we breath, but we never die,
We feel, we burn, yet we never cry.
A silent whisper, in your ear,
A gentle wind, you can barley hear.
We are the light of the north,
We are the rainbow on a clear blue sky,
We are the painful good bye.
We are the ones who never come forth.
Angels and heroes to our feat fall from grace,
For ever loosing the name, and face.
We are, who is, immortal since born,
Never do we laugh, never do we mourn.
We are, who is. With you as our maker,
We are, who is. With you as our father.
We live to see you die, and live once more,
As we will be forgotten never more.
Copyright ©
DukeW
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2008-08-26 04:48:01]
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Re: We are
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by allforyou on
Tuesday, 26th August 2008 @ 06:31:37 AM AEST
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i like the structure of this and the repetitive use of "we" which i guess is the reason u entitled it "we are"
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Re: We are
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 26th August 2008 @ 09:43:17 AM AEST
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nicely done,
wiz |
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Re: We are
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 27th August 2008 @ 12:06:34 PM AEST
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Beautifully written. I was going to mention how mysterious I
felt this was and then I noticed your "topic" selection. *smacks self*
If feels .... I dunno .. light. Like it is floating freely in air, but not aimlessly.
No, it has purpose. It has foundation. It has an essence with meaning. I love
how inspirational it feels. Very profound writing. Well done poet!
~ Breezy
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Re: We are
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by eeeitak on
Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 09:03:14 AM AEST
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"We live to see you die, and live once more,
As we will be forgotten never more."
i love that. very cool write friend, it's unique and beautiful. |
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Re: We are
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by whitt on
Saturday, 11th December 2010 @ 05:50:21 PM AEST
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| very well written :) |
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