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Sweetest Suicide
Contributed by
squirt
on
Friday, 22nd August 2008 @ 12:54:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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life goes on
just another day
this is the sweetest suicide
blood pours out
of my open wounds
this is the sweetest suicide
the haunting smiles
and heartless laughter
this is the sweetest suicide
the pills are counted
the knife is sharp
this is the sweetest suicide
the letter placed
my final breath
this is the sweetest suicide
and now at last
i say goodbye
this is the sweetest suicide
Copyright ©
squirt
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2008-08-22 12:54:27]
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Re: Sweetest Suicide
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by The_Phantom on
Sunday, 24th August 2008 @ 06:07:27 AM AEST
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Interesting write, thanks for the read.
The Phantom |
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Re: Sweetest Suicide
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by maggot on
Monday, 25th August 2008 @ 02:04:30 PM AEST
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| good write man |
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Re: Sweetest Suicide
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by eeeitak on
Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 12:49:09 PM AEST
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this is a very great write, it's strong and unique.
i love it, well done! :)
--Katie |
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Re: Sweetest Suicide
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by ratty on
Wednesday, 5th November 2008 @ 09:00:58 PM AEST
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| Nice write........enjoyed reading it |
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Re: Sweetest Suicide
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by Jen54 on
Sunday, 21st December 2008 @ 11:16:43 AM AEST
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| Nice job |
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