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My Cobblestone Road
Contributed by
beautiful_letdowns
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Thursday, 21st August 2008 @ 03:32:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Somedays I walk along a hazy path
A one where no one stops to ask
How are you or top of the mornin'
A foggy cobblestone always foreign
Visions of the life to lead on all sides dance
I continue with not a backwards glance
Profiles of those I once knew fade to dust
In order to keep them communication is a must
But on my cobblestone road I have no attraction
But to continue my way with no distraction
Beauty lurks but does not stay
Only shows to guide my way
My pace persistent and destination unknown
My only insight is that I am alone.
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Re: My Cobblestone Road
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by Ambivalence on
Thursday, 21st August 2008 @ 02:41:48 PM AEST
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insightful piece...i wouldnt say ur alone, but rather independent, which is a good thing cuz there are people (who i know personally) who cant do things without having someone with them, which shows their insecurity/loneliness. even tho u mite feel alone, ur not, u hav others to help u along ur cobblestone road. good luk, take care
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Re: My Cobblestone Road
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 4th September 2008 @ 01:58:49 AM AEST
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sooo beautiful...
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: My Cobblestone Road
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th October 2008 @ 03:02:41 PM AEST
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| A very touching and lonely piece. It's too bad you can't find a way to touch upon the visions you pass by. |
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