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Shelter..
Contributed by
jnep
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Wednesday, 20th August 2008 @ 08:08:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A cold morning as
Tears fall from the sky, silent.
Yet our hearts are warm.
Copyright ©
jnep
... [
2008-08-20 20:08:54] (Date/Time posted on
site)
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Re: Shelter..
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th August 2008 @ 11:37:47 PM AEST (User
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Aw, what an IMAGE!! This is so beautiful and comforting.
You are really good at these haikus!
~ Breezy |
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Re: Shelter..
(User Rating: 1 ) by zenith66 on
Thursday, 21st August 2008 @ 12:47:52 AM AEST (User
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stunning yes!!1 such a vivid and warm image inside a small haiku, this shows talent , i love a good haiku, it takes alot of skill to truly write one!1
well done!! |
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Re: Shelter..
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 21st August 2008 @ 09:54:18 AM AEST (User
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Brilliant!! |
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