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Hell's Desert
Contributed by
ravenblack_phoenix
on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 03:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Quietly I stumble,
Tortured through the depths of hell’s desert,
This pain makes me humble,
And it begins to fester...
Why dost thou tease me so?
Why dost thou make me suffer so...
Cast out upon this barren wasteland,
I cannot live, thou hast broken my soul...
Now let me be.
Leave me to hell’s sea,
Scorched by the sandy waters rising all around me...
I’ve had far to much of this wasteland for my liking,
So I shall end it, drown...
Down to the depths,
Cast down by those who have not wept, will not...
For all the tears I’ve been given, I am drowning within.
A sea of harsh, sandy tears,
Scrape my skin, now my blood is thy blood...
Thy blood and thy sand, cast me into my undoing,
Trapped eternally within hell’s desert...
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Re: Hell's Desert
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 10:43:55 AM AEST
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God... The imagery in this poem is fantastic. Such a unique idea and you conveyed it wonderfully.
Congratulations on a brilliant piece of work!!
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Re: Hell's Desert
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 10:43:56 AM AEST
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this was well written and i like it
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Re: Hell's Desert
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 11:31:24 AM AEST
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| not to be repetitive, but i love this poem, all your poetry is vividly wonderful, this one has such a gentle flowing and i think how you move along, maybe talking to your soul, or love; is beautiful... hugs nessa |
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Re: Hell's Desert
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 02:56:10 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this one also. Your doing a gret job.Keep writing I'll keep reading them!!
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Re: Hell's Desert
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 02:56:32 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this one also. Your doing a great job.Keep writing I'll keep reading them!!
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Re: Hell's Desert
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 02:45:13 PM AEST
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A brilliant masterpiece I loved this. The imagery was excellent and vivid. I think this is the first of your poems I've read. I hope to read more you have a way with words. Once again an amazing poem.
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