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untitled
Contributed by
redsleeve
on
Wednesday, 20th August 2008 @ 09:33:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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time has come
our defining hour
will we rise
will we cower
pick your head up
don't look away from me
pick it up
don't drop the blame on me
Copyright ©
redsleeve
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2008-08-20 09:33:01] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th August 2008 @ 11:51:39 PM AEST (User
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I am so very intrigued by this. I love how you left so much
out so the reader is able to "fill in the blanks" so to speak. I
think it makes it much more relatable and personal to each
reader. Well done. So few lines that provoke so much emotion!
Tremendous post!
~ Breezy
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Re: untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 21st August 2008 @ 02:46:27 AM AEST (User
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An inspired write, well done. |
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