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Reflection
Contributed by
crow
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Tuesday, 19th August 2008 @ 11:21:52 AM in AEST
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I stood Her before the mirror..
and asked what do you see...
Do You see the Ocean green
in Your eyes..the clarity..
do You see the smile..
wanting to break from your lips..
do You see the fine lines..so distinct.
Do you imagine a flower...right about here..
or a ribbon..
gracing the flow of Your hair..
and do You see hearts melting..
if You shed a tear.
Do You see kindness and forgiveness..
all wrapped up and waiting..
Do You see past the mirror?...
A tear launched from Her eye..
my god Lane what are you looking at...
Your Reflection.....Vincent
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Re: Reflection
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 19th August 2008 @ 11:44:35 AM AEST
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A very gallant and sweet gesture... well written...
Jenni |
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Re: Reflection
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 19th August 2008 @ 12:38:58 PM AEST
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good GOD! That was one of the most beautiful things I've ever read! Lane you
astound me, man! You always kind of whisper your thoughts to the wind
and allow the breeze to carry them to hearts, speaking in soft tones, but this
one is not a whisper. It's an out loud confirmation! And it is damn captivating.
LOVE THIS!! LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS!!!
I am floored! Truly. A sight to behold ~
*roses at your feet*
~ Breezy
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Re: Reflection
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by Seeker18 on
Tuesday, 19th August 2008 @ 01:12:44 PM AEST
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Truly, lovly...
I almost wish there was more to it.
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Re: Reflection
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th August 2008 @ 08:00:46 AM AEST
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| Well spoken! I so hope you got through! |
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Re: Reflection
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by NoSaint on
Wednesday, 20th August 2008 @ 08:51:26 AM AEST
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| through the eye of the beholder...lovely my friend |
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Re: Reflection
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by ingeniusidiot on
Wednesday, 20th August 2008 @ 08:49:49 PM AEST
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Utterly beautiful man. You did an amazing job. I am trying to get my wife to see the herself the way that I do....And this is pretty close to the conversation that she and I usually have. Lovely.
Rich |
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Re: Reflection
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 21st August 2008 @ 08:23:22 PM AEST
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How very very impressive! I applaud thee. You or the person you are writing about is an absolutely awesome friend. Beautiful poem about a beautiful friendship.
Thank you,
Tim |
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Re: Reflection
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by eeeitak on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2008 @ 04:19:09 AM AEST
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this is just, amazing.
absolutely amazing.
strong, and beautiful...
well, color me impressed! :D
--Katie |
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Re: Reflection
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 9th September 2008 @ 02:32:10 PM AEST
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awwww sooo sweet!! you are quite the knight in shining armour my friend, always there when someone needs you, always a gentle light in the darkness,
hugs n' love nessa |
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