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Look away
Contributed by
SuicidalSon
on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 03:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Look away
if you don't like what you see
Look away
I am only me
Look away
I was the best I could be
Look away
as I set myself free
I was only a man
with no life in my plan
holding a knife in my hand
waiting to leave this land
away from the damned
where GOD left me stand
alone in the sand
as though I was scammed
I was nieve
I used to believe
there was something for me
but theres nothing I see
no future to be
so now I will leave
cutting my sleeve
away from the grief
So look away
if you don't like what you see
Just look away
I am only me
So look away
never again to be
Just look away
its over I'm free
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SuicidalSon
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2003-03-18 03:05:00]
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Re: Look away
(User Rating: 1 )
by lostforgood on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 01:10:35 AM AEST
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| this is very touching, i have enjoyed :) if ya ever wanna chat send a message my way |
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Re: Look away
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 02:40:07 PM AEST
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Very good poem although rather sad. I liked the rhyming structure. i don't know if u right from personal experience or not, but hang in there i know what those feelings are like.
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