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~Where's the road~
Contributed by
shelby
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Monday, 18th August 2008 @ 12:02:36 AM in AEST
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Humid oh yes late into this night,
100% percent it doesn't feel right.
The thunder is booming, sky is gettiin blue streaks
rain starts pounding, windshield wipers speak.
Beginning to wonder if we are lost.
No sighs no stores keep going at no cost.
Streaks on windshield hard to see
this little road gets the best of me.
Pull off at a closed station scrub on the glass
climbing up and down rain isn't gonna pass.
Look at the map we still have no clue
sometimes I oft wonder who makes these rules.
Off the big truck goes a lone riding outlaw
still questioning where is the road??
10-4
that was southern states
we are in Nashau Newhamshire with my sister and brother in law for weekend whoooooooo hooooooo fun times with my family-
Copyright ©
shelby
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2008-08-18 00:02:36]
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Re: ~Where's the road~
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by beautiful_letdowns on
Monday, 18th August 2008 @ 12:37:05 AM AEST
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| oh this was cute and sounds like it could be put to music but maybe that's just me... thanks for posting! |
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Re: ~Where's the road~
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by NoSaint on
Monday, 18th August 2008 @ 09:38:15 AM AEST
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sometimes it seems like the road just washes away...good to hear from you my friend
Hugs
Shari |
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Re: ~Where's the road~
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 18th August 2008 @ 11:27:08 AM AEST
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Hi Michelle~
Sometimes doesn't matter how hard
you try to find it, you tend to find yourself
going round in circles trying to work out
the map and if the road really does
exist. Hope you get back on track my
desert princess~
Nice write my friend. Catch up soon.
huge hugs,
sue m |
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Re: ~Where's the road~
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by wizard on
Monday, 18th August 2008 @ 10:14:13 PM AEST
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driving in NH can be a little like driving through a twilight zone...lol...sounds like you figured that out ;)
nice post,
wiz |
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Re: ~Where's the road~
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by ingeniusidiot on
Tuesday, 19th August 2008 @ 02:38:45 AM AEST
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nice write..I miss reading your work...hard for me to write while we arent able to talk....
but this piece reminds me of home....
Talk to you soon my friend
Rich |
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Re: ~Where's the road~
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th August 2008 @ 07:50:45 AM AEST
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I hate driving in heavy rain!!!!!!
But I am glad you are having fun!! |
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