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Nothing can do us part
Contributed by
phaNeo
on
Sunday, 17th August 2008 @ 04:27:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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He parked the car and then he opened the door
But checked himself one more time in the mirror, before he put his feet on the floor
He was in a hurry, he knew he was late
'Cause she was waitin for him lookin at the gate
He picked up the flowers he bought at the shop round the corner
Their sweet perfume intoxicating even the dead gargoyles
He walked upto her wid a smile, tryin to hide his guilt
But to his wonder, she welcomed him wid a smile
They get close to each other
He touched her lips n she trembled
Tears fell from her eyes 'cause the wait is over
Though its only for sometime they could be together
'cause he had things to do, fight the cause that threw em apart
which he had been tryin to do since two years, with so much of pain in his heart
But its not the time to think about it
that he's with her, after the blows that had his heart hit
He showed her his new suit, bought especially for this occassion
'Bout their li'l gal sally, Who's with her friends on vacation
He showed her the photo of their kid infront of their mansion
which she missed a lot, though she'd never mention
But its gettin late as the dawn was comin and he had to go
She didn't wanna let him, but she couldn't either say No
'cause she knew what people would think of him
they'd either call him a freak or some might pity him
So he stood up and tells "Rest in Peace My Love ! "
Then he walked and took one last look at her soul as white as a dove
Then he told his heart
that's where she still lived,
"Darling, Nothing can ever do us part !"
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phaNeo
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Re: Nothing can do us part
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by beautiful_letdowns on
Monday, 18th August 2008 @ 12:44:02 AM AEST
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| Wonderfully and beautifully written.. very unqiue.. you gave it a feel that most poems I read don't have - that zest that causes your eyes to not be able to stop reading.. thanks for posting this, I loved the flow of it and the rhythm was very well paced. |
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Re: Nothing can do us part
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by wizard on
Monday, 18th August 2008 @ 10:17:58 PM AEST
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nice post, i enjoyed this,
thanks for sharing,
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