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story of a teardrop
Contributed by
eternalsunshine
on
Saturday, 16th August 2008 @ 01:02:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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each glimpse of memory
sends rain through my eyes,
washes all the love
once shared...
teardrops falling on the ground
gathering in one place,
reflecting like a mirror
playing a story once lived...
your eyes shines through it
like crystal beneath the surface,
hiding in vain
whispering secrets...
i wish to lift the veil
that cover your eyes with clouds,
to know whats deep within
the true color of your soul...
to rise
like the sun in the sky,
shining love unto the world
in my eyes...
Copyright ©
eternalsunshine
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2008-08-16 13:02:37]
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Re: story of a teardrop
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 16th August 2008 @ 01:36:14 PM AEST
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Ahh...this poem has such a calming effect on me... Beautifully done....
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Jenni |
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Re: story of a teardrop
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by ZiggyB on
Saturday, 16th August 2008 @ 02:43:02 PM AEST
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Nice writing...a touch of sadness I detect
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~Stephan |
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Re: story of a teardrop
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by writer123 on
Saturday, 16th August 2008 @ 03:51:13 PM AEST
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| It was a very nice free verse poem. |
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Re: story of a teardrop
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by funnyface09 on
Saturday, 16th August 2008 @ 06:32:19 PM AEST
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"teardrops falling on the ground
gathering in one place,
reflecting like a mirror
playing a story once lived..."
this is beautiful...i supposed is sad in the beginning,but it turn out happy in the end..nice write...
:)
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