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Star Child
Contributed by
Bubbles02
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Saturday, 16th August 2008 @ 08:39:41 AM in AEST
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I want to quit; I’m done.
You want a star child, well, I’m not that one.
You tell me I have to finish my commitment.
There are so many things I want to tell you, but instead, I stay silent.
My screams, I wear on my body,
Where no one can see.
Not even you.
If my friends told you how much I was hurting, you’d deny it was true.
You think you know me, what I’ve been through.
But you haven’t got a clue.
So sick of having to hold up the image for you that I do.
I should show you just how much I’m hurting.
But I know it would break your heart if you knew I’d gone back to cutting.
So I’ll just keep that in, just like everything else.
I’ll just keep hiding everything until I can’t no more.
Maybe then, when I finally break and walk out your door,
You’ll realize that I’m not your star child.
Maybe then you’ll realize how hard it was for me every time I ever smiled.
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Bubbles02
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2008-08-16 08:39:41]
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Re: Star Child
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by Ambivalence on
Saturday, 16th August 2008 @ 09:25:29 AM AEST
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deep stuff. hope u can get thru each day without hurting yourself. please, take care
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Re: Star Child
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 16th August 2008 @ 12:41:29 PM AEST
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Oh this is so sad.... but so well written...
Hope it gets better for you...
Jenni |
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Re: Star Child
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by writer123 on
Saturday, 16th August 2008 @ 04:04:46 PM AEST
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| It's good, but....so angry. |
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Re: Star Child
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by Voice of the Silent on
Sunday, 17th August 2008 @ 09:19:58 AM AEST
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| good write I may not be going through what you are but i can relate |
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