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Desert Rain
Contributed by
ingeniusidiot
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Wednesday, 13th August 2008 @ 09:45:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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Desert rain
So precious and so pure
As it falls upon the earth’s parched lips
Reviving a weary traveler as he does wander
Hitting the ground leaving a darkened stain
For an ailment finding an immortal cure
Like from a fountain of youth only taking a few sips
As through countless childhood memories he begins to ponder
Desert rain
So precious and so divine
Bringing life back to the dying soul
Before the might crags reaching into the skies
Washing away the remnants of yesterday, the dust and the pain
Like the might mighty gates of Heaven, he stands and waits in line
The burning sun and heavy burden took their final toll
Entering among the angels, his eyes will shed no more tears and his ears shall hear no more cries.
2008
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ingeniusidiot
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2008-08-13 21:45:04]
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Re: Desert Rain
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by Muinanyere on
Thursday, 14th August 2008 @ 03:46:46 AM AEST
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| I'm not really religious but I can appreciate this poem still, I loved the imagery you used, very beautifully written |
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Re: Desert Rain
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by deadwriter on
Thursday, 14th August 2008 @ 05:46:04 AM AEST
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Rich,
This is great. You should have no worries about this one.
Deadwriter
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Re: Desert Rain
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 14th August 2008 @ 11:54:21 AM AEST
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This is a beautiful write with great imagery. I love the metaphor and parallels, great job.
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Re: Desert Rain
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 14th August 2008 @ 04:56:50 PM AEST
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Lovely, descriptive and very well crafted.
I love hearing about the desert, I find it intriguing and so full of mystery~
You have done a fabulous job with this.
I thoroughly enjoyed this write. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.
hugs,
Dreamer |
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