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youre destined to be cold..
Contributed by
beefybeebuzz
on
Wednesday, 13th August 2008 @ 04:07:57 PM in AEST
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there was a time in this eternal sunshine
that i had thought that this whole world was mine
it took me time to get older and smarter and see
how truly ****** up my whole life was supposed to be
soon i came to realize what ****** up these streets
how in a nice little city there was nothing to eat
there was nothing to feel and there was nothing to love
then i had turned my hopes, desperately, to help from above
i could cry in the shower and i could cry in my bed
but i could never get these voices of truth out of my head
i was learning too fast but i was running too slow
i even asked for a better life, the answer was no
i looked for joy in others but all i found was more pain
i seeked happiness in family but was left in the rain
i tryed to think to myself, at least im not alone
but then a little birdy said my troubles were my own
i had friends here and there but none of them gave a < ****
it was my time to test out my luck
i looked up from the shadows and saw some more shade
i saw a broken mirror when my image started to fade
then i fell through floor into a room with a door and ive been there before
it was a room in my dreams except i was awake
and i was hearing a voice..but it wasnt fake
but it spoke loud and clear and told me to get out
to forget about this pain and that without a doubt
if you focus on the good in life you will see the best
and that my friend is the answer to this whole test
it was the epiphany of life its not what it seems
put a line between reality and your dreams
but push and pull and keep on trying until you are through
when you persist you find out what you can truly do
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2008-08-13 16:07:57]
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Re: youre destined to be cold..
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by Muinanyere on
Wednesday, 13th August 2008 @ 04:25:32 PM AEST
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| I really loved this, I was at the edge of my seat while reading every line; this is so beautiful. I understand some of it very well. I have no hope right now but I hope I can have some someday. Thank you for posting this. |
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Re: youre destined to be cold..
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd March 2009 @ 01:33:20 AM AEST
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I certainly wish I could be as optimistic as you. Nice write.
Take care,
Tim
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