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Dancing Through The Sky
Contributed by
eternalsunshine
on
Wednesday, 13th August 2008 @ 12:25:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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i walk with amazement
as my toes touch the ground
penetrating all the love
from this wonderful earth
called life,
as i look up the sky
i see beauty all around,
my feet start to shiver
as i'm lifted slowly up
leaving all behind,
as i fly through the sky
the sun shines bright,
as its rays slowly caress
whispering secrets
of love,
you once forgotten
my tears fall like rain
remembering the moment you left ,
washing the summer away,
the leafs are turning dead
as my love slowly vanishes
into the winter cold
it will fade,
but i will survive these cold nights ahead
knowing my love for you
will stay to last,
need nothing more
just a glimpse of your eyes
once more,
and memories for life,
i will forever dance
with the sun through the sky,
in joy of having you once in my life
i will cherish it
till the end of time...
Copyright ©
eternalsunshine
... [
2008-08-13 12:25:38]
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Re: Dancing Through The Sky
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 13th August 2008 @ 12:37:28 PM AEST
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| very sweet and beautifully written. |
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Re: Dancing Through The Sky
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 13th August 2008 @ 12:46:34 PM AEST
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Beautifully written, my friend..I believe it's better to have loved and lost then to have never known love at all.....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Dancing Through The Sky
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 14th August 2008 @ 01:20:17 AM AEST
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aww this is very sweet and heartfelt.. lovely job here
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Dancing Through The Sky
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 14th August 2008 @ 12:16:37 PM AEST
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Such a wonderful and refreshing outlook with a hint of pain. Beautifully expressed.
~Jesse |
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Re: Dancing Through The Sky
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by ek_da_poet on
Thursday, 14th August 2008 @ 01:13:33 PM AEST
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| this is madd good, while reading it i could visual your words in my mind, keep up the write |
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Re: Dancing Through The Sky
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by ZiggyB on
Thursday, 14th August 2008 @ 10:03:21 PM AEST
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Sounds like a strong love to me.
Excellent write
~Stephan |
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Re: Dancing Through The Sky
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by Crow on
Thursday, 14th August 2008 @ 11:30:31 PM AEST
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| memories of love are the very best..excellent write. Lane |
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