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I've Seen It In Thunder
Contributed by
allforyou
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Wednesday, 13th August 2008 @ 09:22:13 AM in AEST
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The way my eyes, they have come back to life,
like you tapped in my veins, drained the hurt like a knife.
The way my mind stutters when I think about you,
and I get so light-headed, and I get so confused.
& your smile, it makes my heart grin lung to lung.
The way that word sounded when you said it, "us,"
like my heart skipped a beat, like I never grew up.
And I've read it in words, in figures, in numbers,
I've heard it in lightning, I've seen it in thunder.
I think tonight awake will do just fine.
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Re: I've Seen It In Thunder
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by ribbons_and_lace09 on
Wednesday, 13th August 2008 @ 10:52:35 AM AEST
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wow! i liked this one sooooooo much! good job! :) i liked how you said "it makes my heart grin lung to lung." very creative. keep it up. :)
always,
megan
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Re: I've Seen It In Thunder
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 15th August 2008 @ 12:05:13 PM AEST
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| Girl, you've got it bad, lol. I love this write as much as the one I just commented on. I love how you personify, such as your mind stuttering, and your heart grinning. Great job! |
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