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Not Worth Taking
Contributed by
MissTeenSuicide
on
Wednesday, 13th August 2008 @ 12:22:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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This is not the life I wanted
This is not where I want to stay
Though I've made up my mind
I can't change anything, anyway
Any noise feels overwhelming
Any movement unnerves
It doesn't help me, talking
While all these thoughts spin and swerve
I wonder what to do next
Wonder how to act
Wonder whether to do something
That I can't take back
It's the story of my life
A life that's not worth taking
There is no use to carp or fight
It's a spirit that's not worth breaking
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MissTeenSuicide
... [
2008-08-13 00:22:24]
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Re: Not Worth Taking
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by Voice of the Silent on
Wednesday, 13th August 2008 @ 07:42:42 AM AEST
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| I don't know if this is how you feel or if it's just good poetry but I know exactly how you feel or i think i do I feel that way all the time but i've found that if you have a friend or two it makes it bearable and if you think you don't have any I'll be your friend email if you want to talk |
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Re: Not Worth Taking
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by Muinanyere on
Wednesday, 13th August 2008 @ 04:32:30 PM AEST
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| I feel this way everyday; you wrote this so well. If you ever need anyone you can talk to me if you'd like to. I know my screen name looks pretty (probably) but it means "hidden sorrow" |
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Re: Not Worth Taking
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by ingeniusidiot on
Wednesday, 13th August 2008 @ 09:19:51 PM AEST
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I have to agree with everyone that a friend or two makes things more bearable. You did a really good job here. And I have found out that writing and getting it out helps alot too.
Once again great job.
Rich
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