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Insane in the Membrane
Contributed by
foRbiddEn
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Tuesday, 12th August 2008 @ 06:14:55 AM in AEST
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I'm insane
from all this pain
just sitting here
drinking this beer
wishing everyone around here
would go away
i need someone to love me
i need to be rescued
put me on an island
let me die---or something
take me away
away from here
did i say i was insane
from all this pain
and beer
I'm too cool for that---not
maybe
why do you look at me like that
do i look crazy. maybe.
its OK. i might forgive.
maybe. probably not.
have i said that I'm insane yet?
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foRbiddEn
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2008-08-12 06:14:55]
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Re: Insane in the Membrane
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 12th August 2008 @ 11:54:40 AM AEST
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I get it
you're insane....
I like this. |
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Re: Insane in the Membrane
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by ingeniusidiot on
Tuesday, 12th August 2008 @ 08:53:19 PM AEST
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I like this..good job.
I know how you feel..I ask that question all the time to those around me....
Never get a verbal answer though...only their looks which speaks volumes.
Great job.
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Re: Insane in the Membrane
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by maggot on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2008 @ 02:22:11 PM AEST
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good write.... i like it
~maggot~ |
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